Seong+Hoon's+Writing

Don't Push!

2-7-09  Once there lived a rich man. He loved to party! But unfortunately sometimes he liked to trick people.

The rich man decided to throw a party, and lots of people came.

“Come out to the pool”, the rich man said mischievously. The guests ambled across to the swimming pool, wondering why the rich man wanted them to go to the pool.

The pool was so large, there was a shark living in it!

“If you swim to the other end and back, I will grant you three wishes”, the man exclaimed deviously.

Everything went silent, you would have been able to hear a pin drop, no-one was in the pool.

“Nobody is swimming”, said the rich man, and he was sad.

Splash! Water sprayed everywhere as a young man leapt in to the pool. Swimming strongly, the young man reached the end, and came back triumphant.

The rich man asked the young man, “What is your first wish?”

“I would like you to give me a musket”, the young man replied, and he received a musket.

“Your second wish?” The rich man inquired.

“I would like many, many bullets” the young man said, and the rich man gave him bullets.

“What is your last, and final wish?” The rich man asked.

“I want a hand grenade!” The young man demanded, so the rich man gave him the hand grenade, wondering what was going to happen.

“Alright!”, The young man shouted, “Who pushed me into the pool?”

One man put up his hand. "Me!" a man said in a small vioce

The young man loaded the hand grenade with the bullets, and shot him.

“You pushed me into the pool and I almost died!” The young man shouted angrily.

By, Seong Hoon 

This was Seong Hoon's last story in New Zeland

This is the not edited story!!!!

One man is rich.He like to party. But some time he trick people. "Come to swimming pool." and people came to swimming pool. Its so big. It's funny thing is shark in the pool! And man say "If you are swim to the end and come back I give you 3 wise." nobody was swim. avry people was quiet. rich man say "nobody doing swim." rich man was sad "Splash!" rich man tune around. young man jump to the pool! young man swim to end and come back. Rich man say to man "what is your first wish." "can you give me a musket." rich man gave a musket. "what is your second wish" rich man say to man "can you give me bulets?" rich man gave many bullets. " what is last wish?" rich man ask to man "can you give me a hand grenade" rich man gave a hand grenade. then man say all people "who pushed me in to the pool." "me"said a man and then young man put the bullets on musket and shoot him, and young man say " you push me in to pool I am almost died