Student+Published+Writing

=Welcome to the Written Language Publication Page for the Seniors at the Hamilton Seventh day Adventist Primary School!= We hope you enjoy the Fabulous writing of some very talented authors, as much as we do!

Please feel free to leave feedback. In order for Feedback to be helpful it should focus on any of the following: **Surface Features -** *Spelling, punctuation, grammar or paragraphing (Was it easy to read?) **Deeper Features -** *Story content (was it exciting to read?) **Other Features -** *Things that the writer could perhaps improve on in the next story. Please don't be afraid of leaving 'constructive criticism'. Remember - it will only be helpful for our students and their improvements. Please also be mindful that the students are at different levels (Years 5 - 8). Thanks. Enjoy!
 * Story start (did it have an attention grabbing start?)
 * Vocabulary (did the story have many interesting words?)
 * Character development (Are the characters warming? likeable? Un-likeable?)
 * Message of the story - was there a clear message in the story? Moral?
 * Was there a clear problem in the story? Solution?

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