Luke's+Writing

=Welcome to Lukes Writing Page:= Grade: 5/10
 * Some descriptive words setting the scene early in the piece.
 * Surface features have mistakes throughout the writing.
 * Tense - past and present mix ups.
 * A good start to the term in regard to your voice for this piece.





Make the Bed First the duvet and all blankets and the sheets are placed on the floor so sheets to be washed. After that the cupboard is opened and new sheets are chosen. Then the first sheet is placed on the bear mattress Then a matching sheet is placed on top. Following the blankets placed and tucked in then last but not lest then the duvet and the pillow is placed on the complete bed. Then you stand back and gaze at the great work you have done and now you can do the other house chores.