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BMX “Wow check out that for a jump, “yelled Joel. “Man that was a crazy, how do you do that no footer cancan, “screamed Leame. “Alex you should go in the jump competition In 2 days, “said Joel with excitement.” “Ok I’ll do it is there going to be money involved in this competition, “said Alex with a exited voice. “Trust me there's going to be money involved, “said Leame. “I’ll do one jump & I’ll call it a day, “said Alex with a grin on his face. “Ok lets see you do a back flip, said Joel with excitement. “Ok I’ll do a back flip in 1,2,3,4,5, said Alex a bit nerves. “Oh No, “screamed Joel. Joel saw Alex when he was in the air he froze & he smashed his Head into the ground with blood coming out of his ears, he died from impact. “Joel was screaming & was saying it was my fault for saying 1 more jump. “Then everyone yelled at him & said it’s not your fault, “yelled everyone. “said with a deflated voice, that’s it,” I’m going to dedicate my jump for Alex, in the competition, yelled Joel. 2 weeks later at the competition. “It’s Joel & Scar Face in the finals this is the rules you guys have one jump each & the judges will grad you, who ever gets the most points wins ok you guys get it, “screamed the commentator. “Scar Face is jumping first he goes, wow he does a no footer cancan he gets 98 points out of a 100 for that jump, “Lets see Joel, he says he is dedicating this jump for Alex … he’s going the crowed is silent. A baby is bellows from the distant stadium seat he does it! A back flip, he gets 100 points Joel wins,” yelled the judge. “You know guys, I fell a lot better know” yelled Joel over the fans now we can go home & relax,” yelled Joel.

BY Nathan 26-03-09 LOST IN THE FOREST “You gotta be joking, I’m going to die with John, this is bad, “yelled Timmy. Timmy was looking at the smoking engine. “We might have a chance there's a lake in the opening of the trees, “screamed the Pilot. SMASH! They hit the lake a lot quicker than the Pilot thought. “were sinking, shouted John. “You get out of the plane & I’ll see if the Pilot is ok, “squealed Timmy. Timmy felt the Pilots pulse he didn’t know much about first aid but he new that the Pilot was dead. “Hey Timmy I thought you drowned, “yelled John. “Lets make a camp & fire before we freeze to death, said Timmy with a nerves voice. Timmy tried to hold his tears back, the next morning Timmy started to make spears & bow & arrows. “Hey Timmy did you here that rustle in that bush, “squealed John. “Yes & it’s coming right at us, “screamed Timmy. A shadow crept towards them. The silhouette of a huge monster looking thing stood before them. It’s a man, “yelled John. As he was eating his finger nails off. “BULA I come in peace I have lived here for over a 100 years & I’m sick of it, “said the bush man like he he had a sore throat. John & Timmy tried no to squeal like little girls. “I see your making arrows, “said the crazy man with a weird voice. “ yes we are, “said Timmy with a puffed voice. “We’ll your going to need those trust me, “yelled the bush man. As he walked away Timmy & John looked at his huge gouge like was attacked by a beer & a tiger.

TO BE CONTINUED

BY NATHAN CRAW DATE 4-6-09

Making my bed Making your bed can cause catastrophic disasters in your brain, so read this & it will make your life so much easier.

Firstly, you stand up & then take the durvay off the bed, so it’s easier to make the rest of the bed.

Then, you pull the sheet up to the top of the bed so it looks better.

Thirdly, you fold the sheet back about a quarter of a metre, so it’s easier to get in the bed.

Following that, you nicely cover your bed with the durvay without making any crinkles.

After that task, you push the bed back to the wall.

Lastly, you stand back & have a look at your work..